
© Copyright Renu Vyas
The old couple, sitting quietly by the window
Drooping shoulders, sad old figures, all alone
The crowds and the world pass them by
As they gaze on, neglected, forgotten and unknown
They watch the children shout and play
And remember fondly of their own
Their giggles and laughs, and running so fast
And the seeds of love they had as a family sown
The daughter’s need to sit in their laps
Her non-stop chatters and dimpled smile
All now things of the past, forgotten so fast
While she grew up and moved on in life
The Son’s games of cricket, and basket ball
And the sticking of band-aid on grazed knees
His bonding with his Dad and clinging to Mom
Now just remain as cherished memories
“We are grown up now and we need our space
We have our own dreams to fulfill”
The children had claimed it was their life
Leaving the parents with their loneliness to live
The couple now sits, side by side
The days are now spent gazing at the phone
“Will it ring today ? will the children call ?”
They sit and wonder, so lonely and forlorn
Old age and loneliness...nice write up !!
ReplyDeleteThank you Veena :)
DeleteNicely written Renu. Brings tears to my eyes....
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Thank you.. I wish you had left a name :)
DeleteIt Is your "Papaji"
DeleteNice one...sad but real..
ReplyDeleteThank you Shweta..:)
DeleteA bitter truth of present age, very nicely and effectively presented...very touching..
ReplyDeleteThank you Kailash Ji :)
DeleteHeart touching and beautifully written :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandeep :)
DeleteThe loneliness and tragedy have come alive in your words... wonderfully penned...
ReplyDeleteThank you Maniparna :)
DeleteBut... do children of today really want to sit in the laps of antique pieces?
ReplyDeleteWell, I'm an old man too.
Well said..times, thoughts, feelings and priorities have changed..I guess that is what we seem to the younger generation - antique pieces :)
DeleteSad story. True for many...
ReplyDeleteThank you Anita..it pains me when I see such incidents..
DeleteEvery word is an expression Beautiful composition
ReplyDeleteThank you Sanjay :)
Deletevery nyc
ReplyDeleteThank you Suman :)
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